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I promise you there was never anything wrong with you,
it was always me.

I'm sorry for ruining our fairy tale dream,
I would give anything to have you back.
(And the truth is I've been broken since you've left.
I always was the type that wasn't committed into being in a relationship
because I was afraid that I would end up heartless.
But the truth is that I should have believed you
when you said that you were different.)

I used to love your soft kisses
because they always made my heart feel alive again.
You always whispered ''You're beautiful''
in my ear but I never believed you.
(All I would do was laugh to myself.)

I know it's hurting you,
but it's killing me.
''You know I make you wanna scream. You know I make you wanna run from me baby, but now it's too late you've wasted all your time.''
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This is one of those poems where you want to send a simple massage and a link to this basically saying "This is how I feel" and try again, even when you cant because its over and you know it is.

:heart: I wish i had a fraction of the talent you have with words, this is just... yeah.
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FallApartToHalftime Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:heart:
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reeyka7h Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2011
<3
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FallApartToHalftime Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:heart:
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HinataLikesPandas Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2011
<33333333333
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FallApartToHalftime Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
i'm guessing you know the song i used in the artist comment? :D <333333
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HinataLikesPandas Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2011
*nod nod* 8DDD <3
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FallApartToHalftime Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
.. i thought you would. <3333
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AvengedInTheEnd11 Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2011  Student Writer
Avenged Sevenfold references<3 beautiful
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FallApartToHalftime Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
thank you, love. <3
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AvengedInTheEnd11 Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2011  Student Writer
You're welcome of course Dear <3
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FallApartToHalftime Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:heart:
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MadRhapsody17 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2011  Student Writer
This piece truly wrenches your soul because a lot of people can relate to this. I know I can...

Splendid!
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FallApartToHalftime Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:heart: thank you, love! :tighthug: i appreciate it! <3
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ravenclaw99 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2011
awww, this is really good!
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FallApartToHalftime Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
thank you! :la:
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PoeChan Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2011
thats really beautiful yet sad.....
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FallApartToHalftime Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
thank you, love. <3
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PoeChan Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2011
your welcome darlin :iconblackheartplz:
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xLostInTheCrowdx Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2011  Student Writer
Avenged Sevenfold Inspired poem? How could I not love it :D

Beautifully Written.
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FallApartToHalftime Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
yes, why yes it is. <3

and thank you, love. <3
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xLostInTheCrowdx Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2011  Student Writer
I knew it! :D Scream is actually one of my favorite songs by them.

No Problem.
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FallApartToHalftime Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:XD: i just love that song, i never get tired of it. :la:
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xLostInTheCrowdx Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2011  Student Writer
Me Niether :)
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FallApartToHalftime Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:heart:
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demongrl56 Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:'( nothing can describe how this touches me....right on my soul...damn you're such an excellent writer.
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FallApartToHalftime Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:hug: thank you, love. i'm glad you like my poetry so much. :heart: it means a lot to me. <3
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x-Vogue-x Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
This is beautiful, well written.

I submitted this to my group, I encourage you to join our community of talented writers. The group is #ForTheLoveOfWriting
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FallApartToHalftime Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:heart: aw, thank you love.

and sure, i'll be honored.
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daydreamer1324 Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
That description is more than enough to get an exaggerated eye roll out of me. The poem is just amazing, there really isn't much else to say.
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FallApartToHalftime Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
thank you, love. <3
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dracoholic13 Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Indeed, i feel the same :hug:
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FallApartToHalftime Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:heart:
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yukini Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2011
It makes my hear bleed.
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mjthinkpink Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
i like your choice in formatting c:
lovely poem [:
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FallApartToHalftime Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
aw, thank you love! <3
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schoolmaniandevil Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Great work intertwining 2 of my fav songs and making it REAL to me.
Very well done.
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FallApartToHalftime Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:XD: thank you, my dear. <3
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BlackSnowWonderland Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Awesome as always Light. ;)
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FallApartToHalftime Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
thank you, lovely. <3
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DERPPPPPPPPP Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
This is gut-wrenching, but such good work.
Gut-wrenching in the sense that I remembered those feelings, reading this was like reliving them..
but in a good way.
This is fabulous <3
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FallApartToHalftime Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:hug: thank you, love. <3
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DERPPPPPPPPP Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem <3 :>
It was beautiful
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De7h1nK13 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
its beautiful... like u congrats...
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FallApartToHalftime Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:blush: aw, thank you so much! :tighthug: <3
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De7h1nK13 Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
no problem...
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indigotakesawalk Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
That's really good. And I know the feeling well... Ah yes... It's a great poem. You convey a whole bunch of emotion in it which is great. Very nice.
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FallApartToHalftime Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:heart: thank you, love. <3
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KomoLove Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I'm actually on the verge of tears right now. This really hit me, I miss him all over again. :iconcomebackplz:
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FallApartToHalftime Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:tighthug: i'm here for you if you'd like to talk about it, love. <3
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