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I promise you there was never anything wrong with you,
it was always me.

I'm sorry for ruining our fairy tale dream,
I would give anything to have you back.
(And the truth is I've been broken since you've left.
I always was the type that wasn't committed into being in a relationship
because I was afraid that I would end up heartless.
But the truth is that I should have believed you
when you said that you were different.)

I used to love your soft kisses
because they always made my heart feel alive again.
You always whispered ''You're beautiful''
in my ear but I never believed you.
(All I would do was laugh to myself.)

I know it's hurting you,
but it's killing me.
''You know I make you wanna scream. You know I make you wanna run from me baby, but now it's too late you've wasted all your time.''
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This is one of those poems where you want to send a simple massage and a link to this basically saying "This is how I feel" and try again, even when you cant because its over and you know it is.

:heart: I wish i had a fraction of the talent you have with words, this is just... yeah.
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FallApartToHalftime Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:heart:
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reeyka7h Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2011
<3
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FallApartToHalftime Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:heart:
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HinataLikesPandas Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2011
<33333333333
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FallApartToHalftime Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
i'm guessing you know the song i used in the artist comment? :D <333333
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HinataLikesPandas Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2011
*nod nod* 8DDD <3
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FallApartToHalftime Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
.. i thought you would. <3333
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AvengedInTheEnd11 Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2011  Student Writer
Avenged Sevenfold references<3 beautiful
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FallApartToHalftime Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
thank you, love. <3
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